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Elske's avatar

Wonderful!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

My husband says he hopes it’s not a prophecy Elske, now I’m beginning to worry! 🫣

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JoAnna's avatar

Love the alternative ending, very funny and Roald Dahl-ish 😁

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I couldn’t resist, my husband is now praying it is not a prophetic ending!! Thank you Johanna xx

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JoAnna's avatar

🤞🏼😅

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Justin Deming's avatar

Thank you for the shoutout, Susie! It’s very much appreciated. Hmm…my favorite Roald Dahl story might have to be James and the Giant Peach. A difficult decision without question!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

You are very welcome Justin… that’s a good choice for a favorite and I agree, a difficult choice too. I think mine is probably The BFG… I think!

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Justin Deming's avatar

A great choice, too! You can’t go wrong with any Roald Dahl book. 😊

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Emily Charlotte Powell's avatar

Funny and slightly chilling!! It brought to mind the book Hannibal - I never looked at a pig the same way after that!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Haha - Goodness yes! I am surprised I could even find the courage to wander down to the pig farm only a few days afterwards!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Love, love, LOVE the alternative ending.

Fabulous advocacy for some great fictioneers ... and thank you so much for the kind words.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Phew... I’m so relieved... I thought after I mentioned it that I shouldn’t have - pitting plums was never so stressful! And you’re very welcome Barrie, thank you for your always kind words!

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