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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it lively xxx

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JoAnna's avatar

So good and very intriguing!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Many thanks Elske, I am enjoying writing these short stories... it feels like good training of the mind! X

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Elske's avatar

Oh such a good story, love it!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

That’s the same year as me Debs! Thank you... it was a little rushed but I made it just..!

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Debs Stott's avatar

Ooh yes! So unexpected. Love that the ancient papers come from 1964, the year I was born!

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Corinna Mazzotta's avatar

I thought it said 1694? I did wonder if that was part of the mystery! 😊

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Debs Stott's avatar

Aah, my bad. I misread that 🤔

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

It did, it was a twist on the year I was born... and definitely part of the mystery! well spotted!

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Sonya's avatar

I can visualize this perfectly. Well done Sherlock 😝

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I was rummaging through paperwork yesterday, as I often am and found the old deeds to the house in Nespoulières! I’m so glad you liked it darling...🙏🏽♥️

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Pippa's avatar

Uuuh I love it! So mysterious and intriguing 😍

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I very new to this so I'm delighted you do... thank you so much 🙏🏼

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Pippa's avatar

🥰

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Love a mysterious imagining. Nice

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I didn’t think I was going to make it this week..! Then I found that box... glad you approved ..!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

I have a couple of longer tales brewing; one light, one dark. Something to wrap up over the weekend before I return to some 100-worders for next week.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I'm shall look forward to those, I have a feeling my writing time is up for this weekend, I have a date with a house covered in ivy and vines...🪓

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Sounds magical ... oh, and I couldn't stop myself. Since I wrote that note to you I just wrote a 100-word piece for Erica's Friday Fiction. Ridiculous! Straight off ... 102 words, small edit, done! Slow down, Barrie

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Haha..! You are uncontrollably brilliant Barrie...! Don’t ever stop..!!

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Incorrigible, perhaps ... far from brilliant, but thank you for the boost!

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